Haiku #4

Posted: 06/20/2008 in Haiku, Japan

More wasted efforts
They are going the wrong way
Oh I am sleepy

Comments

  1. Johnbot5k
    23 June 9:44 pm

    …….

  2. taro nishigaki
    24 June 9:47 pm

    haike1 to haike4 is one poem, if we put them successively.
    it is being expressed your feeling very well.
    off cource each haike1 to haike4 is a haike poem.
    if you make one haike evryday, you will be a haijin (a poet who make haike).
    sometimes you had better add the word which shows season or weather or a symbol of thing.

  3. fukurou
    30 June 8:02 am

    つゆぞらを
    はらして あすは
    たびのひと

    きをつけていってらっしゃーい。

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